Insomniac

I count the stars in sky
To the darkness I feel nigh
Galaxy of thoughts swirl around invisibly
Chained to night yet floating free
As each star relate my blessings
I lose the count , memories jangling

I look above again and wonder
Is it really dusky? echoes whisper
The silent breeze sweeps my tears
Yet again my eyes turn blear
The dreams that robbed my sleep
Now sings lullabies that linger deep

Wishing words forgotten as they writ
But this insomniac remembers every bit

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20 Responses to Insomniac

  1. Vinay says:

    very beautiful poetry, Sitara! πŸ™‚ loved the rhyme in this!

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  2. Pen says:

    This is simply brilliant.

  3. bendedspoon says:

    beautiful thoughts. I love it when ‘each star relate the blessings’ πŸ™‚

  4. Jingle says:

    very stunning imagery, thanks for sharing…

    πŸ™‚

  5. lunawitch15 says:

    well as it is almost 4 am here, I can tottaly relate!”

    πŸ™‚

  6. insomniac here and i also have to deal with galaxy, nay, galaxies of thoughts……nice poem, like it…..

  7. Hema says:

    Beautifully written! Nice rhyming!

  8. Rahul-Foxy says:

    Well written Sitara! The night does have that…quality that calls to some of us. More often than not, I feel more awake at night than I do in the morning!

    Cheers,
    Rahul/Foxy

  9. Sitara says:

    Yes rahul , I can very much relate to it . The darkness reveals more than the presence of light !!

  10. ayala says:

    Beautiful poem πŸ™‚

  11. Bodhirose says:

    Insomnia beautifully described, Sitara. Although, I don’t normally suffer from insomnia, I definitely am a night owl and can stay up into the wee hours of the morning.

    • Sitara says:

      Well , thats nocturnal πŸ˜› And there is not much of a difference between an insomniac and a nocturnal ;)Thanks Bodhi ! πŸ™‚

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